Greencheekyconure's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[It's DIMB's Birthday]

It's the thought that counts!

Who cares if it's not well animated.
At least you bothered to make something.

PopSecret responds:

lol thanks

[the side effects of pivot]

Looks promising.

WelI Done: I thought you deserved a 6 for effort and for a first go it was brilliant.

Ratings:-
Animation:3/10
Style:5/10
Originality:2/10
Effort:8/10

Explenation:-
Animation: A bit choppy, try to work on walking and falling mainly.
Style:The fact that you took a picture of your own desktop rather than stealing an image off google was impressive.
Originality:This was what ruined it for me, the fact that the Animator vs Animation idea has been done too many times for my liking. Try something different.
Effort: This was'nt very well done in respect of length, about 32 seconds, but I know that you must have taken more than a day to do this, so you get an eight.

Criticism:Make sure you live up to your promise of getting rid of the middle thing. (oh and sorry about the sign in the middle, it wont be in any of my other vids)

Thanks,
Green.

[Madness Hunt 2]

You know what?

Remember gabrielbarsch turned you down for a collab once? (I forgot which one)
But seriously, if i had to choose between seeing gabriels madness streak 6 and the next installment of this... You know what i'm getting at.
I think you're better.

Crazymonkey154 responds:

Yes, but after seeing my improvement, he decided to let me in. You really think I'm better? Thank you!

[Pac-man goes: ForMadness2]

WOW!

This is alot like madness, those two guys in the car were like sanford and deimos.

[Battle One]

Familiar with this?

Each round was too short not enough action to go around.
Sound familiar?

Blitz9z9 responds:

Yah sounds familiar, the difference is that I actually gave you a constructive critic in your game.
And this is my first flash thats minimaly acceptable, giving it a 1 really shows that you dont like people saying that you have to improve your stuff...
Criticising is part of flash posting, either good, or bad, live with it!

[Dicktionary.fla]

Nothing new.

The animation was smooth and the music went well but i didnt really get it.
Overall:2/5 5/10

[Trapped1600]

I did'nt really get the feel for it.

I think you could do something great in the future if you put you're mind to it!
A longer bigger version would be appreciated.
2/5 4/10